Dear Son,
A path, it was handed down
For your shoes it was meant
On this path no one drowns
That’s why it’s the way we went
Your genes, they got you a ticket
That much I know for sure
The safe bet would be to take it
If safety were the allure
But you were born with other shoes too
Fit for another life trail
It meanders—as most do
The gawkers may use the word fail
Don’t look back whatever happens
There’s nothing here to see
The cord is cut, not slackened
Your skills demand you be free
And the noise please do ignore
The mouths they will flap away
Attached to those who bore
As in their success they slowly decay
You deserve other measures
Yes, I know what they are
So be it chump change or treasure
In this place you’re already a star
Love,
Dad
12 Responses
Beautifully written! Made me tear up.
Thank you! (Me too.)
Beautiful !! Reach for the stars !!!
Thanks! Absolutely!
Very nice poetry for your talented son.
Thank you.
Love this. Beautiful and powerful
Thank you!
A man’s reach should exceed his grasp, or what are the heavens for? (Paraphrased from Browning)
Thanks! That’s a brilliant line.
Beautiful!
Thank you!